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Old 05-04-2008, 12:50 PM
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Hello.. I'm a newbie in SEO, I just registered my blog's custom domain and I'd love to hear your advice about it

Here is my site
http://www.sexygamebabes.com
Keywords I'd like to optimize for: "sexy games","sexy babes" and "video game babes"

It's not yet indexed by google.. maybe my old domain is (3dgamebabes.blogspot.com) but I just submitted the sitemap for this

I also have a personal blog that I don't really know what keywords to optimize it for.. It's messy: http://vrokolos.blogspot.com

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Old 05-04-2008, 03:24 PM
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Welcome to the forum.

The first thing I'd say is that you don't have any content. If I was on Google and followed a link to that, I'd hit back almost immediately thinking it was a spam site.
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Old 05-04-2008, 03:44 PM
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What do you mean when you say I don't have any content? Do you think I need more text? More pictures? More posts?
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Old 05-04-2008, 05:33 PM
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It just looks a little spammy at the moment. I expect your niche has an above average number of spam sites too.

You definitely need more text. I see the old site had more.

I'd dump the ads too or at least tone it down a little until you're in a stronger position. When you're submitting to directories for instance, your site is much more likely to be approved if it isn't over saturated with ads.

And change the titles of the games pages. For example, "Sexy game babes: Battle Raper" should be "Battle reapers hot babes" or something. THink about what keyphrases these pages are targeting and optimise the title/headings accordingly, for both search engines and to attract clicks from users viewing the title in the SERPs.

And get your CSS into an external style sheet!
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Old 05-05-2008, 05:37 AM
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It just looks a little spammy at the moment
This probably has to do with all those external links on the sidebar. Should I just remove them? I just keep them for SEO (with a NOFOLLOW tag)

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You definitely need more text
Noted. I'll have to figure out what kind of text is appropriate for my site

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I'd dump the ads too or at least tone it down a little
I need some help with them and they're not that profitable. I hate it how they look now. Maybe I should put some image ads on the sidebar or something? What do you think will be more profitable? Give me all your advice

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change the titles of the games pages
This ain't easy with blogger. If I do that i'll have to put the <title> tag above the <head> tag and this will probably mess with my SEO. Should I do it?

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get your CSS into an external style sheet!
Done

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